Monday, October 28, 2019

Stupid Things You Do With Your Plot


I love this commercial. Geico really nailed it on the head with this one. But, I want you to think about your own writing today. Are you making your characters do these same type of things in your stories?

Too often, in an effort to advance your plot, to add tension, or to create conflict, writers often have their characters do things, or say things that frankly, no human being would ever do. Although you might think it is a small thing, the reality is that your readers will not be so kind.

So, what have I seen?
  • Cops deciding it is OK to date the key witness?
  • Heroines being stalked by a killer thinking, at that key moment in the chase, stopping and having a "thing" with the hero is a good idea.
  • Ministers thinking adultery is OK
I think you get the idea.

So, take the time to look at the things going on in your story. Is this something that would really happen?

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