Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Labor Day Blog Hop Winner!!!

Hopefully for those of you who followed the blog hop, you won some great prizes and heard from some great authors.

The winner of the best first line for the HOP here goes to....

Christi Corbett

"Every Wednesday Kate stood on the same front porch, her hand poised inches from the door, willing herself to do the unthinkable—walk away without knocking. "

I thought this line really had some great potential. From this line, we can see how Kate has really been struggling with what ever issue she is facing and we really do want to know what is going on with the charcter.

So, with that said, Christi can submit a partial of the first three chapters and synopsis either for critique or as a real submission.

Email me with something specific I need to see in the post and the email so you don't end up in the SPAM folder.



  1. Scott,

    Thanks so much! I look forward to your critique!

    Christi Corbett

  2. Email the agency and put Requested Material - Blog Hop in the subject line. Include all relevant information within the body of the email and attach the critique.